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There it is
  that freak again
I feel it creeping in my brain
pulling nerves and tangling veins
  but won't come out
I've even hanged me from my spine
came crashing down
      every night
crack my head open so
  she'll leak out
Yet she tangles in my hair
breathing whispers in the air
  stuffing words under my skin

       "And nothing is ever wrong
  but nothing is ever right
can't you feel this In between
  is driving us insane"
:icondokuneko:
Ahh, it's been so long since I last wrote something. I'm feeling pretty rusty, but I hope it got me out of my poet's block xD
I'm not sure what I was thinking or feeling at the time, so I can't really say anything about this. I'll try to work on it later when I've cleared my head a bit ^^;

And last, but not least, I'd like to thank everyone who takes the time to read/favorite/collect/comment this and any of my work in general, it truly means a lot, even if I don't reply on time !!
:iconkanda-kun:
Woah! Really nice.

Actually I fell like this since I graduated. I don't feel like doing anything in my life, but feel that I should do something, like getting a new job, earning more money... but i also feel I just want to rest and wait for the world (and some people) to blow up... I don't know what to do now and this uncertainty is killing me.

Great poem ^^
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~Majcen007 Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You didn't know what you were feeling? You where feeling stressed, worried that your poem wouldn't turn out. But it turned out great! I have to write more poems too. Great job ;)
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