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In fits of Rage

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I can see that
you too are suffocating
  in our skin

   sometimes

Feel them, they're
everywhere

in the mud
in this bruised
mind
     us

Maggots, eating up
     our head
from the inside out


Rip off the flesh
in fits of

    RAGE

but they're still wiggling

   Nothing left but bones
and they're still Hungry

It's raining
but the fire burns brighter

  Have mercy!
    Let us rest..
..lacking a better title.

it's amazing how you can mess up your own head, with doubt, even if you were not really given any reason to do so.
Fabulous..
© 2011 - 2024 dokuneko
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x-Maya-x's avatar
I likes this.
I can relate to it
And the structure of this poem adds to the 'crazy' effect (=